hmm..since it's advanced critique..dont mind if i critique >_<..the proportions arent really good..you need to work more on the face shape..and also the body proportion. your outer leg isnt very well connected to the body .... from the waist you can see that the outer leg isnt drawn from the correct point..also..when you bend your leg like that there is a line to distinguish the left leg and the right leg at the butt(hope you get what i mean..just look at how people draw them in their drawings)...the thighs of the outer leg isnt long enough....the back isnt positioned right for your posture....you did the sword cover right but the back isnt positioned to make it look like it's supporting the sword covers.. you look at the mirror then see how much you back is shown when you do that posture...also the clothes isnt flying in the right direction...overall it's not too bad..but practice makes perfect anyways!

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Awesome ! Great job, hun. ;D

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This is not bad!! love the pose too~

Love her eyes and pose >w<b

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It's just the head. But everything else here is great!!

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Hmmm not too bad actually...improving but you could do without 'sharp' body parts. The body isn't very proportional but yea, i know it's hard! I understand
Do notice these few things: the forehead is too sharp and high...the waist below onwards needs some more improvement...the sword positions...and maybe larger hands would do
I can't seem to understand that sword scabbard sticking out awkwardly. Sorry but yea, you can do it!! It's actually improving compared to your previous works! I still love the butterfly maiden!

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I think i will add this to my faves eventhough I've made loads of 'honest remarks'. I actually kinda like it. It is elegant, has a great colour sense...and great background.

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haha. u know when i first upload this to DA. i look at it and was horrified. 'She looks like a freaking doll with short legs.' Ergh. But i like the background. The sword sux coz i was too lazy to change it.

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Omg. U have the same instinct as me . I realized the mistake. But if i were to change it, means I have to redo teh whole picture. WASTED rite?

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